Short story writing

Here's a story that I wrote in my english class.
We were supposed to pick a "sixnovel"(a novel consisting of six words) from a list or come up with a custom.
I decided to do the latter and it ended up with "Unsolved murder of mother. Suspicious brother."(it rhymes!).

I made pretty many changes over time and I wish I had a little more time to write it but I'm pretty satisfied with the result. Hope ya like it!

Edit: Yippiyay, I got A as grade(highest possible!) for this!